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(all)(all)edof the ISO 19115of the ISO 19115; at places where ISO is abstractly mentioned; please align through the whole document Martin Seiler, Peter Kochmann
Acknowledgementslist of members of MIWP-8gelist is incompleteadd: James Resid (UK), Ine de Visser (NL), Marc Leobet (FR), Marie Lambois (FR), Eliane Roos (FR), Peter Kochmann (DE)  
AcknowledgementsContact informationgecontact person Massimo Craglia seems to be outdated?  
Forewordthird paragraphed"This new version aims at clarifying and expressed technical requirements""This new version aims at clarifying and expressing technical requirements"  
Forewordfourth paragraphed

"... led to some confusion no that is actually ..."

please clarify wording  
Forewordlast paragraphed"The goal has been to only to clarify the existing...""The goal has been to only to clarify the existing..."  
Reading guidance and transition periodfirst sentenceed"As the structure of the document structure...""As the structure of the document structure..."  
Reading guidance and transition periodfirst sentenceed"the following sections have been to help...""the following sections have been <filled in / added ?> to help..."  
Reading guidance and transition periodlist of annexesgeAnnexes A and D are not mentionedadd bullet points for Annexes A and D  
Reading guidance and transition periodthird bullet pointed"... and the TG Requirements on sections ..."please clarify wording  
Reading guidance and transition periodfourth bullet pointed

"...TG Requirement and Recommendations of contained in the version 1.3..."

"...TG Requirement and Recommendations of contained in the version 1.3..."  
Reading guidance and transition periodlast paragraphge

"...a transitional period of 3 years has been defined..."

please add information by whom this period was defined  
Revision historythird bullet pointed"...to specify encoding the the Non-empty...""...to specify encoding the the Non-empty..."  
Revision historyninth bullet pointed"The hierachyLevel element required...""The hierachyLevel element required..."; we propose to align this font family for ISO element names through the whole document for better readability